i want, i want, i want
whatever it might be
that i happen to be wanting
today it is a view
uninterrupted
of where the desert meets the sea
instead what i get
is a plane-flight over rivers of roads
superb ideas that pass like smoke
and birds that cut nothing
i won’t take my time
i’ll leave it behind me
like the wake some hallowed hand creates
floating every bit of the way
© Matt Hetherington
Previously published in fourW
I’ve been following your work for some time now, i do love your style in writing. I really love poetry and yours intrigue me.
Thanks for sharing.
I was hoping, if you’ve got the time, maybe you’d take a look at my latest post perhaps? I would love some thoughts, positive feedback and/or constructive criticism. It’s titled “The Physics of my Magical Black Hair” and is Part 3 of my project I’ve called “Black Enough”:
https://pardonmyblogs.wordpress.com/2016/05/11/black-enough-part-three/
I really do hope you enjoy it and are blessed to share 🙂
God bless,
Makhala.
Hi Makhala, thank you so much for following P&D. I read your piece and I enjoyed it, I couldn’t locate a private message on ur blog for me to give u feedback.
Thank you so much. How do I put a private message feature on my page?
It’s in your settings.